tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post6283870514130313171..comments2023-05-12T05:31:40.756-07:00Comments on My Little Avalon: The Paper - A Friday Flash Horror StoryClaudia H. Blantonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16406380021918841988noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-19360226278561949282013-11-19T04:17:01.720-08:002013-11-19T04:17:01.720-08:00I was actually considering to make it longer, Kath...I was actually considering to make it longer, Katherine, but I have a Dark Fantasy series I am working on right now, so any side project has to fit in a much shorter frame. Maybe one day. That the headline could be fake is good idea, thanks for stopping by!Claudia H. Blantonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406380021918841988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-72784604509733492982013-11-18T20:26:22.439-08:002013-11-18T20:26:22.439-08:00Oooh, I could see this being developed into someth...Oooh, I could see this being developed into something longer. And while the headline was horrifying, it somehow also rang false -- as if someone were going to fake the murder-suicide and frame the father/doctor. Which, of course, makes it just even more scary.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-24021023168660428592013-11-16T07:06:23.909-08:002013-11-16T07:06:23.909-08:00thank you Steve - I don't envy them either. I ...thank you Steve - I don't envy them either. I am happy to not know some things, which is exactly the reason I explored the "what if". Claudia H. Blantonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406380021918841988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-63661051827958541292013-11-16T04:22:37.425-08:002013-11-16T04:22:37.425-08:00A great idea at work here Claudia, I don't env...A great idea at work here Claudia, I don't envy these people their way of life though, it's better not to know when it's your turn, or how it's going to happen.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-2232608278833248112013-11-15T19:24:52.616-08:002013-11-15T19:24:52.616-08:00true - I am glad you enjoyed it - have a wonderful...true - I am glad you enjoyed it - have a wonderful weekend, David!Claudia H. Blantonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406380021918841988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-24143289798476923722013-11-15T19:24:09.367-08:002013-11-15T19:24:09.367-08:00yes indeed it should be, thank you for catching th...yes indeed it should be, thank you for catching that! Glad you liked the story. I pictured the reading as a compulsion, no one wanted to, but everyone did, and if one would not show up, everyone would be talking about them. Thanks for stopping by, Helen - have a great weekend!Claudia H. Blantonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406380021918841988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-77093055665364003032013-11-15T18:16:44.355-08:002013-11-15T18:16:44.355-08:00Nice concept a paper that tells you the future - t...Nice concept a paper that tells you the future - the question that really lies in my mind is that if you knew that, would you read it? Good story with a chill to its edge.<br /><br />btw found a typo for you: ' name of a loved one their.' should be there yes?Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6455131385917697464.post-61737514093373259592013-11-15T09:03:46.779-08:002013-11-15T09:03:46.779-08:00Ouch, nothing like having your dark thoughts confi...Ouch, nothing like having your dark thoughts confirmed. I wonder if anyone tries to stop a murder. Of course, murder avoided wouldn't show up in the paper to announce it in the first place. <br /><br />Fun, I like time-twister stories.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.com